I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Emora, Thank you for showing your work on your blog. I like how you linked stuff on the textbox for proof as if your persuading someone to believe you. Maybe next time you should add more creativity to make people hook on to your post and on the 4th slide maybe you should use paragraphs next time too. I would like to see what you created because it seems very interesting. Keep up the good work. -Ema from your class
Kia Ora Emora, Thank you for showing your work on your blog. I like how you linked stuff on the textbox for proof as if your persuading someone to believe you.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you should add more creativity to make people hook on to your post and on the 4th slide maybe you should use paragraphs next time too.
I would like to see what you created because it seems very interesting. Keep up the good work.
-Ema from your class
Kia ora Emora,
ReplyDeleteGreat Job posting your Matariki Slideshow on your blog and it was interesting reading on the 3rd slide.NICE JOB!!!
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