I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Hi Emora and Ema this is Elena from you class/Edmund Hillary School. I like how you did your planning but I have a question for you on your ellipses you could do three then two thanks bye.
Kia ora Emora and Ema this is Ellakaye here. I like how you have thought really hard about this story and made sure to put all your ideas into your planning. the story was really imaginative and it had really good punctuation in it. I also love the end how it has all the characters that were in the story, Well done!
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteHi Emora and Ema this is Elena from you class/Edmund Hillary School. I like how you did your planning but I have a question for you on your ellipses you could do three then two thanks bye.
Kia ora Emora and Ema this is Ellakaye here. I like how you have thought really hard about this story and made sure to put all your ideas into your planning. the story was really imaginative and it had really good punctuation in it. I also love the end how it has all the characters that were in the story, Well done!
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