I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Well done for getting such an impressive start on this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thank you for sharing with us this beautiful piece of poetry.
I love your lyrics! Did it take you long to put this together, or did it come naturally? Do you think that Neil Armstrong was nervous about ruining his reputation?
Kia ora Emora
ReplyDeleteWell done for getting such an impressive start on this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thank you for sharing with us this beautiful piece of poetry.
I love your lyrics! Did it take you long to put this together, or did it come naturally? Do you think that Neil Armstrong was nervous about ruining his reputation?
Looking forward to your response!
Ngā mihi,
Jordan